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Retreating to the isolation inside my room
curling up in a blanket of misery
Memories replay and corrupt my peaceful slumber
they reiterate

"You're not good enough."
"You disgust me."
"Nobody cares about you."

Tears stream down my mask
The negative thoughts have made the positive evanesce
I just want to be left
Alone
My second poem for creative writing! :iconcatlaplz:
I did free verse poetry all week and my teacher told us to write 2 poems picking from subjects he gave us.
One subject I choose was "Being depressed."

This is the result....I like free verse poetry, but I enjoy rhyming though which apparently is illegal when writing free verse SoOoOo.....Yay! :iconunicornwalkplz:
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:iconthedarkestni9ht:
thedarkestni9ht Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I AM THIS. I feel you.
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Gracefool-Lyn Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
Great poem! I know what it's like to feel that way.
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WafflesxSyrup Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :iconblushthanksplz:
:tighthug: I pray for that your okay now. :)
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Gracefool-Lyn Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
No problem
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xPandaKirax Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist
Wah, I know that feeling. :s This is awesome though! :heart: :tighthug:
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WafflesxSyrup Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much! :tighthug:
The feelings horrible....I pray for your happiness. :)
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Mi-Lee Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012
welcome to my world..
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:iconwafflesxsyrup:
WafflesxSyrup Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:tighthug:
Aww, I know how you feel....this expresses some of my feeling for what happened to me this week....
Don't worry, you're not alone. If you ever need anyone to talk to, my note box it open. :)
I hope you feel better soon! :iconluvluvplz:
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:iconmi-lee:
Mi-Lee Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012
that is so sweet of you.. thank you so much ..
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:iconwafflesxsyrup:
WafflesxSyrup Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No problem...:hug:
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TheLaughingDreamer Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
omg i get soooooooo frickin confused in art theft stuff. will anyone tell me if this is art theft or not for real and why??? -.-#
but the poem is very good and well written :)
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WafflesxSyrup Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'd say it isn't art theft ^^; I did say that this picture doesn't belong to me the desc. therefore letting people know that I did not make it. It's like writing a fanfiction, if I wrote a fanfiction on an anime or book and said "I do not own these characters" That makes it okay because it's showing that the characters belong to someone else. Apparently some still think this is art theft...maybe because I don't have a link to it's creator but I really don't think I need one as long as it's made clear that it doesn't belong to me...it's also just for the preview image -.-
Sorry, I'm ranting...^^;
Thank you for the compliment, I appreciate it. :iconowo--plz:
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TheLaughingDreamer Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks a lot for the clarification (because now i can have a clean revenge for a matching situation) you are awesome!!!!!!!!!
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WafflesxSyrup Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, no problem! Glad I could help. :3
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starlessblueeyes Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
*You're. Just a tip. :)
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WafflesxSyrup Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconfacepalmplz: So sorry, I didn't notice this....I changed it, thank you. xD
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zaniiiiitee Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012
I just feel like this right now.. for couple of days now.
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WafflesxSyrup Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:tighthug:
Awwwz! D: I've felt this way too most of the week...you're not alone. I'm hear for you and you can always note me if you ever need someone to talk or just vent to. :)
I really hope that things imporve for you soon, I'm sure they will. :iconluvluvplz:
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zaniiiiitee Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012
Thank you, you are really nice. ^^
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