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Retreating to the isolation inside my room
curling up in a blanket of misery
Memories replay and corrupt my peaceful slumber
they reiterate

"You're not good enough."
"You disgust me."
"Nobody cares about you."

Tears stream down my mask
The negative thoughts have made the positive evanesce
I just want to be left
Alone
My second poem for creative writing! :iconcatlaplz:
I did free verse poetry all week and my teacher told us to write 2 poems picking from subjects he gave us.
One subject I choose was "Being depressed."

This is the result....I like free verse poetry, but I enjoy rhyming though which apparently is illegal when writing free verse SoOoOo.....Yay! :iconunicornwalkplz:
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thedarkestni9ht Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I AM THIS. I feel you.
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:icongracefool-lyn:
Great poem! I know what it's like to feel that way.
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:iconwafflesxsyrup:
WafflesxSyrup Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :iconblushthanksplz:
:tighthug: I pray for that your okay now. :)
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:iconxpandakirax:
Wah, I know that feeling. :s This is awesome though! :heart: :tighthug:
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WafflesxSyrup Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much! :tighthug:
The feelings horrible....I pray for your happiness. :)
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:iconmi-lee:
welcome to my world..
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WafflesxSyrup Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:tighthug:
Aww, I know how you feel....this expresses some of my feeling for what happened to me this week....
Don't worry, you're not alone. If you ever need anyone to talk to, my note box it open. :)
I hope you feel better soon! :iconluvluvplz:
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:iconmi-lee:
that is so sweet of you.. thank you so much ..
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:iconwafflesxsyrup:
WafflesxSyrup Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No problem...:hug:
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