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I've said my goodbye and I've ripped off my wings
It hurts my heart but I need to get over these feelings
I've suffered for so long under your reign
and I think it's about time that I end all this pain

I'm starting my journey into the begotten future
To find all the missing pieces of my heart that I need to nurture
I'll have to search far and wide and it make take a few years
but I'll grow as a person and face many of my fears

As I slowly grow older and farther from you
I'll never forget our memories and the day that you knew
that I was too much for you or maybe to little
and decided to leave me behind and not to dwindle

Sometimes I may stumble and cry out your name
but don't come back and re-spark the flame
I need to move on, we were suffocating each other anyway
From now on it will be only myself telling me "It's okay"
"It's time to move on....I'm not longer going to look back at you, past."

Well, heres a nice poem....It's pretty much in the same format that I tend to use alot. I like this one and I hope you do as well. :iconwellthenplz:

*Note: I do not own the image above*
Link to photo---->[link]
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Out-4-Dragons-Blood Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
"Let the past burn down in flames" -Dragonforce, Seasons. Sorry, that's the first thing that came into my head when I saw the picture. Regardless, the poem was beautiful! :love:
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WafflesxSyrup Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconbummiesplz: Thats such a cool quote! :D

Thanks so much! :icondragonshy2plz:
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Out-4-Dragons-Blood Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're most welcome :)
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:icontheequalistrevolutio:
Please note you do not own the image. Even if found through google, you must at least link to the original website. This is the common standard for giving credit.

Using art that you do not own, and without permission, is wrong and in the worst case copyright infringement. A link to multiple selections of the original can be found here: [link]

Also here: [link]

Please have some courtesy as an artist to either do your own work or to properly give credit when using the works of others, EVEN if unnamed (unnamed or untitled does not = free to use).
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WafflesxSyrup Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha ^^;
Gomen ne...I'm sorry, I have placed the link the desc.
Thank you for telling me...
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OcantonandDawnLegend Oct 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Very powerful, at least to me. Wish it were as simple to let go of the past if it keeps following you at every turn though...but great job nonetheless! :iconthumbsupplz:
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WafflesxSyrup Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Dawwwhh....Thanks bro. Thats so true....If only the past would simply fade away...*sigh*
But thanks again, I'm glad that my poetry is reaching people...that is my goal. :iconsobeautifulplz:
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OcantonandDawnLegend Oct 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
You're very welcome! :D
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TamiTw Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:/ I feel the same. you executed these emotions perfectly into words with an accompanying photo of course. Thank you!
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WafflesxSyrup Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awwww, :iconsweetblushplz: I'm glad you liked it, I'm glad that my poetry is reaching people and I work hard to make the emotions come out strong, sense they are all my real emotions.
It makes me happy that you liked it, and remember...don't give up, it all gets better. Heres a hug for your happiness! :tighthug:
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